Hesitant Apostrophe

Don’t apologise for your ideas -
I actually liked that one, the way
you describe the light, rounding
the corner, the ice only vapour
on the glass. Things this close

to you. The irises and therein
the kind of longevity we quantify
in an afterlife! The early game.
Wind like nothing we’ve ever seen.
And things we know. I like it. I mean it.